jackbliss's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chip Goes Shopping]

Really good for your first Flash submission. I loved the small intro. Audio and voice synced well with the animation. Looking forward to seeing more. Add a preloader and make it longer next time :)

Ronga1979 responds:

There you go. Preloader installed. lol
Thank you for your input. jackbliss :-)

[Alley Cats]

Perfect sync with the audio and animation. I really love the sleek stylish character design (particularily the purple cat that comes from behind the fence). They are cool and really connect with the song in a different way. I like the way you introduce each character and how they leave once the music is over one by one. Overall great work. My only suggestion is make your next work longer. All the best :)

kurodeshiro responds:

Thank you :) will work on that.

[just a kiss animation]

Hi Anand. Good work for your first flash. I really like your framing of shots. Hope next one will have more animations and less zooming. Also be careful with the file size. Really love the snow effects. Good song choice :)

anandreamworld responds:

thks jackbliss my flash guru lol

[-Broken Strings-]

Wow really sweet!

I love the way you made all those animals approach the guy playing the guitar. Very smooth and each had it's unique style. Also a very nice message at the end. Lot of people will come to you for friendship when your life is going well and in tune but the one who remains even after they are gone is the true friend there in your time of need. Great selection of music also.

Overall it was really good even something I could share with my friends. I think you just need to improve your art slightly and make it as good as your storytelling and animation. Good luck on your future submissions and looking forward to seeing more from you :)

PIED3 responds:

Thanks for the review, art is definitely my weakpoint. Cheers for the 10!

[Bunnykill 5 Part 2]

Great animation but bland and repetitive!

This was so bland. Don't get me wrong. The art and animation was fantastic and truly top notch but it's the same mindless violence over and over again with no point. You should really add some depth into your plot so you feel what's behind all this like Kill Bill does. Sure people will rate your works high now but will they remember it? How would they differentiate your style and contribution to the internet community from any other madness inspired movies? You have what it takes graphics wise but it's time you used it with a little more creativity and better story telling maybe add some maturity or irony there alone the way. Maybe even a small message.

Just ask yourself. Will people remember this animation years from now? If your answer is YES then by all means do continue and my sincere wishes.

Mottis responds:

I agree with all your points but I'm not much of a storyteller. Also, I get the most enjoyment from just designing and animating intricate fighting choreographies, using different fighting styles and weapons.

[C. Crashing a Wedding]

Brilliant!!

Great animation story action fighting sequence and above all the little twist in the end that made me roll on the floor laughing... I can really relate to the poor groom's untimely bowel movement and I'm pretty sure I'm not alone ha ha.

Anywayz kudos to you and your team in the effort and dedication it took in making it and thanks so much for using my tune 'Don't Miss Her Wedding' as the intro music. It's an honor. :)

Now hurry up and continue this... can't wait to see how the rest of it goes!

alfa995 responds:

Thanks for the review! And also thank you for making suck a cool song, I thought it would be perfect for my flash as soon as I listened to it and it did fit quite nice. :)

[Arnold]

Every man's greatest secret is to be a woman lol

A smoothly animated music video about a man takin his feminine side to a whole new level. Great choice of music too. Really set with the theme. If this is only your 3rd submission I truly can't wait to see more from you :)

5/5 vote and 10/10 review from me!!

Suncomes responds:

In fact, it was the flash that was supposed to set the song. Your comment made me laugh. Thanks.

[WTFuture]

WOW!!

Amazing story, original plot, well drawn graphics, great animation, cool characters, nice voices. REALLY funny without the least bit hint of vulgarity which is so refreshing to see especially in the internet community, and above all it's over 10 minutes long so this must've taken some serious hard work and dedication to make! Absolutely no room for improvment and just hope you keep up the amazing work and keep pushing the ultimate NG Flash movie standard higher and higher reaching ever closer to mainstream level :)

5/5 vote, 10/10 review score!!

eddsworld responds:

Thanks man, i appreciante the kind words!

[Modes of Production]

Very good style and informative!

You have maintained a very good style with decent production value throughout the flash and moreover very informative with a nice hint of environmental message to it which is something we all need to be more aware of more than ever due to our current Global climate situation. Great choice of music too.

After you have shown this to your class, be sure to send it to some public service channel or who knows maybe even the Discovery or National Geographic channel. They might broadcast it. Good luck :)

5/5 vote and 10/10 review!!

DeweyGland responds:

We will be sure to do that. Thank you very much!

[I Love Jesse]

Brilliant animation!!

Wow I gotta say this had some very good smooth well controlled tween and frame by frame animation. Not to mention some great lip syncing, good music and nice vocals (although slightly inaudible here and there)

Your character and coloring, shading styles were cute and I seriously think you can easily start your own series. Your storyline was a bit random but still fun and had a shocking sad endling lol. Frankly this deserves a MUCH higher score and hope you can somehow clinch an award.

5/5 vote and 10/10 review... Btw I think "I love Jesse too" would make a nice title for a sequel... don't you? ;)

nahtanojmal responds:

Wow thanks. After seeing the flash thing about "an experts guide to newgrounds" I should have made the preloader and start better to make a good impression for those who vote without seeing the whole thing.