Took me to another dimension!
Not entirely sure what was going on in your mind when you made this, but damn! You really took the viewers to a whole other abstract darker world for awhile and for that I must applaud you for few creators can achieve that with only their 2nd flash and in such a short movie!
Hope your graphics and animation skills improve in time to really bring to life that bizzare wicked imagination you have seem to have in abundance... not to mention some great vocals! 8/10 :)